>Now it’s true that Pages has a toolbar, but it’s tucked up in the title bar where it doesn’t take away space from the document.

Ok, number one the TextEdit bar is like 5 pixels taller so maybe being a little melodramatic here.

But straight up, it's flat out wrong to say "the Pages tool bar doesn't take space away from the document" because if those buttons weren't smashed into the title bar, the title bar would only need to be as tall as the title bar in Text Edit. It's still stealing precious vertical pixels from you, possibly even 5!